Thursday, September 20, 2007

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Look through
a stranger's eyes
Feel the tremor
of untold lies
Reach out in pain
to something dear
Break the hold
that keeps you here
Listen close
to screams out loud
Clear your sight
of needless shrouds
Accept the things
left here by fate
Remove all traces
of unkown hate
Be stilled by visions
wretched and mean
Blinded by horrors
unleashed by this scene
Feel the sorrow
wash over your mind
Control the images
you're forced to find

not finished...i haven't figured out how yet though...

1 comment:

dan said...

Very well written and nice job with that poem. Since we have to comment on your writing I would have to say that it is a run on sentence but its a poem so who cares really.